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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Even/Day/Song You have a style and I have a way together we bring about a new day You are the dark and I am the light without you I am never so bright If clouds arise and they often do folks miss me, and miss you too But in between us rain may fall cleanse the earth and souls of all and then you come and stars abound lift up folk who are earth bound then you leave and forth come I to warm the soul to hear them sigh together we work magic we weave when you come and when I leave. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 22 July 2000 Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You would know that I feel this one ... 'together we work magic we weave when you come and when I leave.' The coming - the going - the magical phrases~ seen so abundantly in your weave. Glad to be among the threads of your tapestry.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your thoughts are so beautifully woven within these lines Sunshine, the flow and rhyme is simply devine! Much enjoyed this musically, magical verse! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You truely are the Sunshine. Beautifully written and it just sings out to me. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine, what a very nice contrast with your words. This is really different and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Very, very nice. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sunshine! that's an upbeat, romantic piece sprinkled with the sage of perception. Great work - you tell that twenty year lover that if he drops ya I'm going to catch ya! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so lovely! It truly has a sing-song quality.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, what can I say...oh I know, I'll go visit your work and get inspired some more... Kit...magic works for me... Mark...glad you like the song...can you put it to music?... Bill...I've been known as different, works for me... Ethome...you're too young, I'm too old, but I like the comment just the same!  PdV - where you been hiding [oh yes, the Alley, under all that Pizza] - glad to see you here! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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