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Lovers Prayer |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Each night before I go to sleep, I whisper a prayer to heaven above. Please let him be here when the morning sun rises. Let him trust and believe in the love that we share. Let the past be forgotten and let futures bright promise be his beacon ever more. Let my love fill his heart til no shadows remain. Every night I send this prayer up above. God bless and keep him My precious love. never say never |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Oh, this is so sweet. I loved it much! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
That dude is one lucky guy to have a girl like you. Hot!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jan...thank you I sometimes think we dont say thank you for all we are blessed with...this is just one way to do just that. Xeonox...thank you, and I believe he does. never say never |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Enjoyed the sincerity of this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... I really liked the idea behind this one! I might just start saying this one myself. Great writing, my friend (yours always are!!) Love received is equal to love given! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula, What beautiful thoughts you have penned. Very sweet and very caring. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...it doesnt pay to pray if you arent sincere... Bill...thank you it never hurts to say thanks for the blessings you are given every day Sunny1...its such a simple thing but...thanks never say never |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula such a lovely poetic prayer...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is a lovely prayer and I know that it is heard. Full of sincerity and praise.  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Paula, You touched on everything I have heard recently, but I haven't really listened to. From letting the past go, to letting the future lead you. When I thought of it in this context; hearing her voice... Well, I think I have an apology to make. Thank you for sharing this prayer. Perhaps He is answering in more ways than you know. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Paula it took a few mins to read but i'll never forget this.love is a gift from god to all of us.sometimes we get dismayed but it's a gift to be appreciated. Sincerely A_L |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...as always you say the kindest things thank you. Mark...it is sincere and from the heart Trew...if it helped then that in itself is an answer A_L...a gift and a treasure and I count my blessings everyday never say never |
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