Open Poetry #8 |
Slow Boat to China |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Let's take a slow boat to China... Lately I've been feeling like we need some time away...... Out on a slow boat to China... Drifting in the moonlight to some long-forgotten bay...... ---------------------------------------------------- We're working every day to make it all come true... But work's not on my mind when that old sky turns blue... I dream of you and me out on some sleepy island shore... Maybe we can take some time and sail away... Leaving all our worries for some rainy day... Just maybe we can find the place that we've been looking for...... ---------------------------------------------------- The sun is dancing golden in a sky so blue... I close my eyes and then I'm dancing close to you... We're dancing naked on a beach beneath a big full moon... That's the way a getaway for us should be... Forget about the money, come away with me... I'll take you to a Paradise you'll not forget too soon!! ---------------------------------------------------- Let's take a slow boat to China... We could use a little time to make some dreams come true... Out on a slow boat to China... No more interruptions, Just the sea, and Me, and You...... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sunny! Denise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Denise... Thank you so much! I'm always glad to see your name on the reply post.... I'm glad you liked this...... ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Simply marvelous! A slow boat to China, what a way to go. Keep them coming, don't stop writing. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunny1, Words spoken from the heart can never fail to touch those around them .Wonderful ! Doc |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill...... Thank you for your kind words!! Doc.....Thank you, also, and I'm glad you enjoyed this.... ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ I've got my ticket .... what time does this boat set sail ? Nice imagery, poet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge... We set sail at midnight!!! As always, I thank you for your kind words here...... Love received is equal to love given! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like a woman with a slow boat...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James.....A slow boat ride uses less gas!!!!! (not to mention, it takes longer to get to where you're going......) I'm glad you liked this one....I do appreciate your reply!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious! |
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