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Lost Chance
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Lost Chance |
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Sari New Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 2 |
I know that I have lost my chance, I know that it’s too late, All the times I could’ve asked you And all the times my mind said “wait” I should have seen this happening I really should have known That although my heart stays faithful, Yours has changed and grown, You never seemed to care much And its now very clear to see, The one that you loved all along, Was someone else, not me I should have asked you when I could, For now the chance has gone, And now I’ll live out all my days Wondering if you were the one Like a Bee without a flower Like a bird without the sky Here I am without you Alone and asking why Why did I let the chance be lost? Why did I leave it too late? All the times I could have asked you, Why did my mind say “wait”? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sari... Wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed this, as I can relate to lost chances. Also wanted to bid you a hearty welcome to Passions............ You're gonna love it here!! ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A most auspicious first post. Very nice. Welcome to our little poetry family. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sari, big welcome to PAssions. A really lovely poem. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed reading this, your first post. Be sure to read the guidelines, have fun and join in! Please check your email for a special message!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sari, Wow, nice display of emotions here in this piece. Good job for your first post with us. Welcome to Passions!! Looking forward to seeing more of your work.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
welcome, sari ... it was a just a short time ago that i too found this haven in cybersapce ... i know i've been given so much inspiration from the talent on these pages ... welcome and i loved your entrance ... thanks for sharing with us ... m.a. My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sari, This phrase is fantastic, I love it. Everytime I read it I gain something new. Me thinks that I will be reading many more of your poems. Thanks for sharing Like a Bee without a flower Like a bird without the sky Here I am without you Alone and asking why |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sari~ Welcome! I really like this and can relate. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sari~ Welcome to the family of Passionate Poets and Friends. I enjoyed your entrance piece ... please enjoy all we have to offer. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Why did my mind say “wait”? I love that line....Sari..it's wonderful ~~softly welcoming you Maureen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to Passions Sari...love this and the meaning that goes with it. To wait is to miss out on some of life gifts, so even if it means taking chances that could hurt, never never not say whats in your heart. never say never |
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