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Just For You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This I send out just for you, I'll kiss my pen and pray... to write for you the end you seek, may you never weep another day. May you find that pot of gold, and all the secrets of her soul, I would give her hand to hold... were it mine to give. All of your wishes would be granted, exit I, the unenchanted, All my heart, my words recanted, to see a smile upon your lips. So this I send out just for you, I'll take your pain, if I can do. Another loss is just small cost, I'd give you leave, to see you live. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Serenity, This was beautiful!! So sweet of you to offer to bear the pain of a friend like that. If only it were that easy in real life . . . Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All of your wishes would be granted, exit I, the unenchanted, All my heart, my words recanted, to see a smile upon your lips. So this I send out just for you, I'll take your pain, if I can do. Another loss is just small cost, I'd give you leave, to see you live. =============== awwwww you would do all this for little ole me LOL WAKE UP JANET MARIE  well this is very sweet and loving me twin.. veey cool poem and rhyme .. MUST BE NICE TO HAVE SUCH A RELIABLE MUSE  (i wouldnt know anymore) maybe I should give her this poem...  its that or im gonna slap her lol later-self-sacrafice-gator me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, just wonderful my friend. . . I am sure that whoever you're speaking of here knows that you're there. . . and would make the same offer to you. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
serenity.... What a beautiful offer to a friend! Whoever they are, I hope they know that they are truly blessed to have a caring friend like you..... ~~~Never say Never!~~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written Serenity. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just wanted to thank you all---you're such a lovely audience, we'd like to take you home with us--we'd love to take you home... Seriously, you guys inspire me so much, I do very humbly offer my gratitude...and JM, me naughty friend, I'll get back with you later! LOLOLOLOL....ah ha ha hee hee |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Serenity, You are the crutch I most rely on and appreciate your being there. Rich |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 I love this side of you. Actually, I love all of you.Mike |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I haven't been around long enough to know everyone's work yet, but yours always catches my eye and my heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil 'Renity~ 'I'd give you leave, to see you live.' I feel an emotion reaching out - sharing with others - or perhaps feeling from within a deeper place. Very tenderly portrayed, little poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rich--Hey YOU...you know that I'm here for you...love and hugs and starshine on ya... mesquirrel---you lovely bushy tail think you, that was so sweet of ya to say! Jan--I am touched by the compliment too...thank you... Mom---Your praise means almost as much to me as my Mother! LOL...Hugs to you as well. |
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