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Haiku You--( I have "haikued" some of passions poets )
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Haiku You--( I have "haikued" some of passions poets ) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Snow from Down Under They dance in the sky each flake is light on the tongue Maree's snow showers Love Is Her Season Love is in season sultry words quicken the pulse her passion devine Kiwi Muse Vague as summer's clouds a softness there to be found Kamlee loves lost words The Redcoats are Coming---nah Don't Shoot Until You See The Whites of....nah A Brit In The King's English Court....nah Wit From The Sceptred Isle His blueblooded wit can cut like a winter wind but Philip is warm Don't Call Him Harmless His stare wilts weak words as the sun might summer fields Chris gives light to grow that is all for now who's next?---not the album by The Who either...lol < !signature--> Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for including me!! I loved these.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Prometheus, Very creative and wonderful idea!! Cannot wait to read more. Well done.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, WOW I'm a Haiku!! I have fallen in love with them, Thank you my BFF... Thanks for including me, so lovely. Can't wait to read more too |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool jamie and creative... i love them all but the one for DA is stunning!! Also the one for kamlee very cool idea... your getting us all addicted to these Kaile is too  later-make it look easy-gator There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Jamie!!! You have done well with all of these. . . they are just wonderful. . . Who's next??? Can't wait to see!!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
~Giggle~ Lost words hey?? LOL...vagueness fits me like a cloak! Thankyou J...hugs...these rock - again!!! K |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ these are very creative and cool! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie I love these never say never |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jamie~ How creative..well done  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Great work on these. They are addicting to read though so, who IS next. Don't keep us waiting too long,please. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
jamie ... not sure whether i should be laughing or crying here "blueblooded" !!!!!!! i always fancied a Title i am honoured however to be included amoung the other august personages in this piece ... (actually i really am .....thanks jamie )fixing bayonets.... charge !!...........P [This message has been edited by Poertree (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Prometheus, A delightful display of your Haiku talent capturing some of Passions writers! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
PDV-Glad you liked it; and how could I not? 8-) Lone Wolf-- Thanks for the encouragement. Maree-- You are indeed. Thanks for being here. JM- I will happily help support your habit. Thanks Sven--You never know--though you feel more like a senryu--lol Kamlee--What did you say???--lol SEA- Thanks bunches Paula- Glad you like. --possible victim--hmmmm tracie66--Thanks. I enjoy yours too. Mark- They are great fun. Give it a go sometime. Philip-- Tis I who am Honoured-(don't think K will fail to notice the "u") to include you. Dennis--Glad to hear the comments.. Thanks a lot. is that yours in the siganature area?? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Jamie ... you do make these look so easy, pure perfection from your talented pen! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Promethus, Yes, that's one of mine that I'm real proud of!(BLUSHING) Dennis:^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well, well, well! This is great! I love the way you diverged from the "norm" (at least as far as all the Haiku I've seen) in the "form" of these! Thank you kindly for including me in with these other wonderful people... though if I could ask a favor.. next time don't put me in with Kamla. Makes her feel special or something... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kit-- Thank you very much. Dennis-- A lot there to be proud of. Christopher-- That sounds strangely like what Kamla said to me....hmmmm---lol. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Get that P - HONOURED...listen to the man...actually did YOU get that too C? And special? I don't need no Cali boy in the same bit of poetry as me to feel special...  Thanks again J, you rock my friend! K(amlee) |
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