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Radiate |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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You say I have a somber face That i dont smile Or laugh Or even part my lips to sigh You say that I never dance that my arms lay limp my feet still and the only rhythm I know is heartbeat You say I dont sing That my voice remains silent My throat echoes empty And even my breathing finds no harmony You say I dont notice you That my eyes are overcast My mind is preoccupied And no matter how hard you try,I wont surrender But I say Even with my expressionless face My motionless feet My songless voice I do Love you infinitely And all That I Can do Is Radiate for you. [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great poem Pout!!!Sometimes our loves' take us for granted...I could feel you wanting him to notice you in a positive way!!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Pp - I like this a lot...something about it just 'clicked' with me - like that last line... K |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
thank you both for taking the time to read and respond...im glad you enjoyed it! |
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