Open Poetry #8 |
nature's spirit |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
By the way S'en and Butterfly Slippers, I will e-mail you soon. Sorry I've been such a b****. Mike -nature's spirit- the trees, the rocks, the sky, the earth, the way the sun peaks on the leaves, dapples the water, the bugs lazy in the air, the dried needles, the sound of water, the clouds, the meadows, the stumps, the moonlight, the snow, the stars. I imagine the girl looking up at the trees. her hair is trailing on the ground, over her breasts, against him -- just the soft glow of the light on them, the starlight like little crystals through the dark, tall trees. Her breath and the crackling fire and the night. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nature's spirit...and you captured this so well that methinks you are more of a witch, than a b****---and hey, there's just a lot of "itch" going around...lol...I exit in admiration, as always...love n hugs. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mike~ Beautifully done...natures spirit you have indeed captured. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I imagine the girl looking up at the trees. her hair is trailing on the ground, over her breasts, against him -- just the soft glow of the light on them, the starlight like little crystals through the dark, tall trees. Her breath and the crackling fire and the night. ==================== now we dont have to imagine this... as you have painted for us so perfectly with your poets pen this is so tender and lovely mike... your so good at this imagery stuff and take your time on the E... we just wanna make sure your groovy... me and sen can scratch that itch for ya later-not-a b****-gator love ya butterfly slippers There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
s'en, Well, a squirrel BETTER appreciate nature, or he's not much of a squirrel, is he? Thank you, Tracie. Butterfly Slippers, Whoa, this conversation is getting hot! Maybe we should continue this in adult? ha ha ha ha! Thanks for the smile. Mike |
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