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With Every Note...Sven's Challenge
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With Every Note...Sven's Challenge |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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With Every Note  ...Sven's ChallengeMelody of my heart, song of my life the tunes that escape press their meanings upon you each time we kiss. With every thought with every touch the music of your love plays upon my heart strings in an endless melody. Feeling your comfort in every word knowing your heart is resting in mine, I dream each night breathing to your rhythm. You are my life my reason, my purpose my will, my strength you warm my soul, brighten each day my friend, my love. Overwhelming is your tune you play to me. With every note I am reminded of the music of your love, the melody of my heart, the song within my life. A musical duet With a friend, SEB. M 2k |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
MMoon and SEB. . . You both have done well with this one. . . created a duet for all time. . . Excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
MMoon, i see nothing of an amateur here...you write good free verse too  moi like these lines muchly: the tunes that escape press their meanings upon you  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sven..thank you so much I decided to check out the challenge forum and was impressed by these lines you chose..I love a challenge in any form...just thought it fun to ask a friend to respond the male part in the italics... ~~soft thanks for the chance to show off a bit kaile...I don't know what constitutes an amateur...I am a former early childhood teacher..the very young speak and learn in rhymes..maybe it rubbed off on me..I have only been writing a short time..but meter and rhyme come naturally, even iambic pentameter which is hard for some...it's the free verse that I have been concentrating on the last few months...it allows for deeper thought...also the moment I began writing and found the poetry responding sites I went out and bought books on writing...I will always enjoy learning... ~~soft thanks again for your constant support. Maureen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MM a wonderful duet, thank you for posting this lovely poem. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brian, thank you for your warm responses to my words ~~soft smiles MM [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ I LIKE THIS ! You took the challenge and ran with it ... taking the ribbon at the finish line. Enjoyed it so much, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thanks Marge..I love this place...almost as comfortable as home ~~soft smiles M |
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