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ma miller
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0 posted 2000-07-20 09:55 PM


clarinet's loon ...

raspy sharp clarinet funk
digging into my eardrums
sunk
so deep into my head
blood curdles
making me wish
i were dead (or is that deaf?)

learn to play
that blasted thing
learn it today
or put it away
down under
your bed of dismay

crystal glasses
know what i mean
frail as they seem
they got nothin'
on my bean

just cut off my head
for shrill chills
making teeth clinch
so tight
my new dentures
will fit just right

end this pain soon
or to the moon
will go clarinet's loon
left only to learn
the bassoon's loony tune


M.A. Miller
07.20.00

note:  i was reflecting back to my early music lesson days (which failed miserably) ... i have nothing against either instrument ...
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.





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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-07-20 11:54 PM


M A Miller, what a "triller"!

Clever clarinet classic...Killer.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



ma miller
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2 posted 2000-07-21 08:47 AM


thanks meadowmuse ... i added the note after the title for fear that some would interprut this to be someone other than myself ... thanks again ...

(love your work btw) ...

Martie
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3 posted 2000-07-21 11:03 AM


MA--I can relate--I remember my son trying to play the violin...now there's an instrament that hurts!
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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4 posted 2000-07-21 11:40 AM


Liked this, MA!  I played the clarinet (considered a nerdy instrument at the time)
but could never make it past 2nd chair.  Gave it up for a cooler instrument (guitar) when I was a teen.

Thanks for sharing this!

Corinne

ma miller
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5 posted 2000-07-21 11:42 AM


same here ... i've been playing guitar for 30+ years now (something i actually stuck with) ... thanks for reading and relating ...

m.a.

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