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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Dont look back Dont see me this way Dont see the empty Dont feel my pain Dont let my self Dont engulf your soul Dont see me cry Dont share my whole Dont hear my screams Dont hold me close Dont plead within Dont scar without Dont let it be Dont turn around Dont walk toward Dont Share with me Dont love me Dont see me this way Dont look back |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
WOW.... This is such a sad statement you've made here Whiskey. I'm not really sure what to say, but I couldn't let this one just go by with out a reply of some kind. Don't see me this way Well, I just have, sorry, couldn't help it. I hope you find some peace. ~Sheri |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
Oh, uummm,..heck....this is awfully sad. Well written expression,...liked the short little phrases and choice of text..but gosh, it hurts to read such sadness. Please take care of you. *Peace. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece spaeak a great deal of emotion. Very good, Whiskey. It's been a while since I've heard from you. Welcome back!! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Don't stop writing! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks everyone for their replies  Thanks Nate for the Welcome back |
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