Open Poetry #8 |
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Whispered On The Wind |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
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I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ like a long ago sigh ~ and I took the time (again) to wonder why I questioned myself but got the same old reply I have no idea why you said goodbye I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ a reminder of days gone by ~ held my heart and let myself cry I cried for memories those shared ~ those that will never be I cried for the loss of you and me I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ felt my spirits fly ~ I made peace with the past and told your memory goodbye. -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ felt my spirits fly ~ I made peace with the past and told your memory goodbye. SEA, a beautiful piece, yes it is hard to say goodbye. Enjoyed reading this. ![]() why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SEA-gator this is LOVELY perfect love the repetition... and phrasing beautiful emotions expressed as well later-whisper-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely sentiments...James |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA, my friend~ Welcome the warm breezes that blow a sweet memory into your waiting remember. It is a special feeling, isn't it ? You did a wonderful job of letting the memories take control and waft gently through this piece. Sometimes we've just 'gotta tell it like it is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Memories seem to flow back like a whisper on the wind. Very well written, nicely flowing work. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
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Brian~ thank you so much for the warm reply ![]() Janet~Thank you! ![]() James~ thanks ![]() Marge~yes, it is very special, and once the tears dry, the heart heals. ![]() Ethome~ I agree, thank you ![]() -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA . . . This was beautiful writing. I just love the end. Making peace with the past is the only way we can truly say good-bye. Have a tissue for those tears. Hope to catch up with you soon on icq. ![]() LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* This is absolutely perfection! I felt every line clear to my soul...such beauty in your words from the painful beginning to the hopeful end~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA.... The words are so beautiful..... "I heard your name whispered on the wind.." I can almost hear it myself. I think the ending really was perfect... it is so very hard to say goodbye to a memory..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
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LW~Thanks, I think you have to make peace before you can truly move on....see ya on ICQ ![]() BDC~ thank you very much. ![]() Sunny1~ thank you, it's very hard to let go..... ![]() -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Liked this a lot. Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ like a long ago sigh ~ and I took the time (again) to wonder why These words are straight from my heart. My problem was that I answered the call of the wind four different times over a number of years and yes each time she said good-bye after only a short time. She has always known that I would come to her when she asked but now I need to find a way to say no and that is not easy. Wonderful write. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautifully touching... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We all hear those whispers from time to time...they are good for us...lets us know that there was love so there can be again never say never |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so touching and tender SEA ... straight from a heart whose mending ... beautiful! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ I'm glad, thank you ![]() Mark~ Thank you ![]() Sunshine~ thanks ![]() Paula~ thank you ![]() Kit~ thanks ![]() -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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