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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-19 10:57 AM



Flicker of a butterfly,
Flying into the sky.
Flying somewhere,
Doesnt know why.
I feel like its me,
Not knowing where to go,
Dont want to see,
Dont want my feelings to
show.
Want to crawl into a ball,
And have a good cry,
Whys my belly empty,
Want to know why?.
A kiss or hug,
Isnt what I want now,
Want to scream out,
Want it to come out somehow.
I open my mouth,
But nothing is there,
Why should I bother?
Why should I care?.
I want to hit things around
the room,
Sit and cry and live in
my gloom.
Dont care what you feel,
Your the one that took away
everythings that real.



© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

1 posted 2000-07-19 11:41 AM


Beth,

writing (and more writing) screams louder than any yell ... i heard you ... dig deeper and flush the scream from your well ...

thanks for sharing

Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-07-19 12:26 PM


~MA Miller...Thanks for hearing (lol). Looks like I am going to have dig deeper cos the feeling isnt out yet. Thankyou ~
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2000-07-19 03:58 PM


Beth,
I can hear the scream, longing to come out, and out it does come in this writing that you have done.

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
4 posted 2000-07-19 04:01 PM


hahah..i love the poem but i still have to tease you....cause i hear you screaming all the time (not to mention you hear me as well)!
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-07-19 05:25 PM


Beth......

        I heard you scream all the way up
  here (Alaska!). I bet you feel better now!

          This was good stuff..........


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
6 posted 2000-07-19 11:44 PM


~Bill, There's going to be more screaming to come..There's alot of unwanted feelings in this heart of mine..Thankyou~

~Pout..Scream girl..I know you can do it cos i hear you all the time (lol)..Thanks~

~Sunny1...I wonder if all countries heard it...maybe not. I'll have to try again (lol). Thanks for the sweet reply~

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