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Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-19 10:57 AM

Flicker of a butterfly,
Flying into the sky.
Flying somewhere,
Doesnt know why.
I feel like its me,
Not knowing where to go,
Dont want to see,
Dont want my feelings to
show.
Want to crawl into a ball,
And have a good cry,
Whys my belly empty,
Want to know why?.
A kiss or hug,
Isnt what I want now,
Want to scream out,
Want it to come out somehow.
I open my mouth,
But nothing is there,
Why should I bother?
Why should I care?.
I want to hit things around
the room,
Sit and cry and live in
my gloom.
Dont care what you feel,
Your the one that took away
everythings that real.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

1 posted 2000-07-19 11:41 AM

Beth,

writing (and more writing) screams louder than any yell ... i heard you ... dig deeper and flush the scream from your well ...

thanks for sharing

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

2 posted 2000-07-19 12:26 PM

~MA Miller...Thanks for hearing (lol). Looks like I am going to have dig deeper cos the feeling isnt out yet. Thankyou ~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2000-07-19 03:58 PM

Beth,
I can hear the scream, longing to come out, and out it does come in this writing that you have done.

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

4 posted 2000-07-19 04:01 PM

hahah..i love the poem but i still have to tease you....cause i hear you screaming all the time (not to mention you hear me as well)!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2000-07-19 05:25 PM

Beth......

        I heard you scream all the way up
  here (Alaska!). I bet you feel better now!

          This was good stuff..........

~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

6 posted 2000-07-19 11:44 PM

~Bill, There's going to be more screaming to come..There's alot of unwanted feelings in this heart of mine..Thankyou~

~Pout..Scream girl..I know you can do it cos i hear you all the time (lol)..Thanks~

~Sunny1...I wonder if all countries heard it...maybe not. I'll have to try again (lol). Thanks for the sweet reply~

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