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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-07-17 12:25 PM

5-7-5

Luna's tendrils drift
Upon wings of wintered night
Kissing liquid dark.

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-17 01:32 AM

Krista~
I love it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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2 posted 2000-07-17 01:36 AM

Wonderful haiku

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Impassionata
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since 2000-07-13

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Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2000-07-17 01:43 AM

Krista....I don't understand the work "Haiku" but I think this is truly beautiful...Thank you.

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-07-17 02:20 AM

Wow, Krista, this is simply beautiful! I love it

LoveBug

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5 posted 2000-07-17 05:49 PM

Another beautiful haiku, my friend!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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6 posted 2000-07-18 12:15 PM

i see the beauty in you ...
even in a brief Haiku

lovely my dear...as i knew it would be..
lunas RULE
later-sweet-gator
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

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7 posted 2000-07-19 11:06 PM

Hi Alwye,

was'nt the moon beautiful the other night just as beautiful as this little gem.

Love, Cerenity

Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula

8 posted 2000-07-19 11:34 PM

beautiful Krissa.. that's all I can say... beautiful..

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

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Blue Heaven

9 posted 2000-07-19 11:47 PM

I love the moon]
I love haiku
I love this luna haiku

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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