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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-19 05:17 AM


This little note is to explain that my closest and dearest friend, Beth, is struggling with a very serious and emotional issue. She was having trouble putting her emotions into words....So I crawled into her heart...and this is what i heard there....


Motherhood, my dear old friend
It seems that ive been blessed again
A tiny seed thats planted deep
Within my womb in sheltered sleep

Those nights of passion I spent in bliss
Entwined in his arms, seduced by his kiss
Not knowing my womanhood had a price to pay
I created a child with my lover that day

And though I love you dear Motherhood
I need more strength to be righteous and good
For I hear her from within,she softly weeps
She cries for her mother whose will is weak

And if this secret, my lover I should tell
His frightened heart would bid me farewell
Abandonded again, I would be
Blessed, but cursed, by this life within me

Motherhood with your divine ways
Hold me close, while I surrender to Fate
Give me the wisdom of the heavens above
To nurture my little angel with bounties of love

Please give me the chance to dream again
So I can escape this hollow pain
Fill my heart with hope and grace
So the miracle of creation, my soul will embrace.


© Copyright 2000 Dawn van Krieken - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-19 06:42 AM


~Pout, If only you knew what this poem means to me. You have made more sense of this tragic time that i have and im the one living it..That goes to show the bond between you and I, and i seriously doubt that it will ever be questioned. You have made my life something I want to live easily instead of giving up and I can only thank you more often and try to be there when you need me. thank you so much for being my strength and friend..I love you~
Blessed Be,
Beth

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-07-19 04:02 PM


poutprincess,
To crawl into someone elses feelings and to write like this is truly a gift. So heart warming, and with so many feelings. You are truly blessed.

Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-19 04:19 PM


excellent poem...

just beautiful...

it's extremely hard to begin to accept something like that, I know.

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