Open Poetry #8 |
He Knows |
Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
Gone away so long Makes the feelings strong. I miss so much Like your loving touch. The whispers in my ear Just to have you near. Laying in my bed With nothing that needs to be said. Caressing my skin Its not a sin. Holding me so near Your breathe in my ear. Our fingers entwine, You saying That your mine. Dreaming of our kiss Feeling Im in sweet bliss. Wishing that tomorrow wont come Knowing inside that we are one. Your going to be back soon I only have to wait for the new moon. Thats not long away I already know what Im going to say. I'll say "I Love You So" You'll say "I already know". [This message has been edited by Beth (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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gem Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39 |
It's such a good feeling knowing that someone really loves you!! I really like it!! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Gem, Thankyou for your reply...I think we all like to know that we are loved. Im glad you liked it~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Beth, may I offer a late wecome to Passions I think for sure that you have been peeking into my heart. This reflects a sentiment that is very close to home [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Another beauty from you my friend. Loved it. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~jeffrey, maybe I could get more peeks into your heart-I need the inspiration (lol)...Thankyou for your sweet reply~ ~Mark, You always make me smile seeing your name here..Thankyou so much~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth.... This is truly a beautiful love poem, and I liked the ending here, '....I already know....' Thank you for sharing this one.... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny1, Thankyou for your reply. Im glad you liked it~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Beth, Another poem to add to the rest of them. I can feel your heart as it crys for a touch. Very nice, very nice indeed. |
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