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I Love The Dark
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I Love The Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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All the world the universe inside me chaos all disperse, release of sigh, all questions why, let the moment write the verse. I love the night. I love the dark. How brilliant is a flash of spark, in silence in my solitude, lighting candles-- sweet perfume, and thoughts that play as if on lark-- I love the night. I love the dark. And in the brilliant light of dawn, I shade my eyes, I stifle yawn... I save the tears that I've not wept-- they wonder why I have not slept... and I feel free. I've played in park. I love the night. I love the dark. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and I love this poem.. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I love your muse beautifully descriptive amazing piece  |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
absolutely, serenity ... great stuff here (i love the dark too) ... thanks. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I think it's beautiful!! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all disperse, release of sigh, all questions why, let the moment write the verse. I love the night. I love the dark. ========= in silence in my solitude, lighting candles-- sweet perfume, and thoughts that play as if on lark-- I love the night. I love the dark. And in the brilliant light of dawn, I shade my eyes, I stifle yawn... I save the tears that I've not wept-- they wonder why I have not slept... and I feel free. I've played in park. I love the night. I love the dark. ================ "I wear my sunglasses at night"  this poem is so cool... and so ~you~... awesome you are me twin.. and so delightfully inspired... going to bed now me twin... ONE of us had to sleep at night lol later me-sweet-nocturnal-gator me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Serenity~ Serenity~ This is a calming and beautifully serene piece of poetry. I'm immensely impressed with the phrases you've chosen to tell of the night. Really, really excellent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all for understanding this one...(it does explain my nocturnal habits, lol...) I appreciate it...again, grats. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I share your love of the dark....tis when my muse wants to come out and play! Great work! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity, a beautifully written piece. Can I bring my flash light to the next sleep over I love the dark too but it can get scary sometimes. excellent piece.< !signature-->the plot of our life sweats in the dark like a face the mystery of childbirth, of childhood itself grave visitations what is it that calls to us?" patti smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to butterflies---I knew you were a kindred spirit! and brian---no flashlights...just candles, and the light of the monitor, of course! nothing to fear...till we run out of beer... Slumber Party at Serenity's...Everyone is welcome! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Serenity Has a certain beat to it. Like this very much. Rich |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I love the night and love the dark, also...with a little glow from the moon... ~~very nice piece, Serenity ~~smiles Maureen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A slumber party?!?!? Can I bring the s'mores??? LOL  Great poem serenity!!! ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks Rich, glad you appreciate my rhythm... Mm---thank you so much, and you are welcome addition here at passions. I appreciate it. Sven, You sound like you've done this before...lol, thank you much me friend. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
wonderful write...I think I will go outside now and look at the stars never say never |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like there is alot of us night people out there. So are there any vampires in the bunch.LOL wonderful write. what's next |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The dark is my muse itself it is my inspiration perhaps the dark is what i was born to i know not if this is true but the dark is inside me Master and slave too. Walter Poe --- dark poet Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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