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Open Poetry #8

Will You?

gem
Junior Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 39

0 posted 2000-07-18 09:05 AM

I'll cast my net forward into the sea of tomorrow,
   if you'll bind its thread with love.

I'll ride bravely the waves of life's ambition,
   if you'll fill the highest with hope.

I'll dive deeply for the treasure of my yet
   fulfilled goal,
   if you'll embed its riches with trust.

I will build my castle in the sands of time,
   if in the end you will fade with me.

Gem

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2000-07-18 09:32 AM

Oh this is so gorgeous

Loved it very much..Oh and by the way it wasn't the title of your poem that drew me so much as your user name...Love it

Welcome to passions
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

2 posted 2000-07-18 09:46 AM

welcome Gem ... a beautiful entrance ... lovely phrasing ... you'll love it here

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

3 posted 2000-07-18 09:51 AM

Gem*
This is beautiful and tender writing, I
enjoyed this piece very much~

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