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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2000-07-18 12:50 PM


Breathe For Me

All in a day I walked through it but on a ray of faith
And, for most of today I did that, I walked with grace
I never knew how much the night now could quickly change
From the look on your face, My Girl, my moment's rain...

I know the moment will pass but your precious smile will stay
And, in my heart I'll feel it as you lie away
Girl, breathe for me, just let my love come in
Now, feel me with my arms around you again...

I don't know why the world has come down on us
But, never can the world take away what I truly love
I hold the way to your few words and all they bring
So, this time Girl, close your eyes and hear these songs I sing...

I sing about a moment that's for just you and I
And, I sing of a lifetime I will treasure along your side
Breathe for me Girl, melt in the light right there
That's me, My Girl, that's how much I care...

Don't you know I walk often without a single place to go
I found mile after mile and not a treasure to show
I can't ever find the right place without your hand
Cause it's that both of us are a part of this plan...

To be the best doesn't mean there's a number in line
It's of the heart and the soul; the purest kind
And, now Girl, you rushed on by and didn't look at me
You didn't listen to the wind when I was on my knees...

I surrendered to you though you didn't think I did
Cause I lied back and let each dream begin
And, I did what most haven't gotten to do
I got as close as the night would allow me to...

I don't regret it just as the sun and moon were meant to be
As all souls have desires to feeling free
I am no different from the ocean or a raging river at dawn
We all rise, sometimes fall, but surely move on...

Breathe for me, Girl, you could use what I have
Maybe I have the way to make it all last
Girl, I touched a part of you that you try to hide
Girl, you chose a second road to avoid these eyes...

Saun




Sauni :)

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-19 07:55 PM


"you didn't listen to the wind when I was on my knees..."---this is a nice discourse on the subject Saun...and one I understand too well..nice work.
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-19 10:31 PM


Saun....

      The words you've written here are
  very meaningful to me.
       It's also a very beautiful
              writing.....as
             everything you do..is.....


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



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