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Breathe For Me ( Written From An Experience On The Spiritual Path)
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Breathe For Me ( Written From An Experience On The Spiritual Path) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Breathe For Me All in a day I walked through it but on a ray of faith And, for most of today I did that, I walked with grace I never knew how much the night now could quickly change From the look on your face, My Girl, my moment's rain... I know the moment will pass but your precious smile will stay And, in my heart I'll feel it as you lie away Girl, breathe for me, just let my love come in Now, feel me with my arms around you again... I don't know why the world has come down on us But, never can the world take away what I truly love I hold the way to your few words and all they bring So, this time Girl, close your eyes and hear these songs I sing... I sing about a moment that's for just you and I And, I sing of a lifetime I will treasure along your side Breathe for me Girl, melt in the light right there That's me, My Girl, that's how much I care... Don't you know I walk often without a single place to go I found mile after mile and not a treasure to show I can't ever find the right place without your hand Cause it's that both of us are a part of this plan... To be the best doesn't mean there's a number in line It's of the heart and the soul; the purest kind And, now Girl, you rushed on by and didn't look at me You didn't listen to the wind when I was on my knees... I surrendered to you though you didn't think I did Cause I lied back and let each dream begin And, I did what most haven't gotten to do I got as close as the night would allow me to... I don't regret it just as the sun and moon were meant to be As all souls have desires to feeling free I am no different from the ocean or a raging river at dawn We all rise, sometimes fall, but surely move on... Breathe for me, Girl, you could use what I have Maybe I have the way to make it all last Girl, I touched a part of you that you try to hide Girl, you chose a second road to avoid these eyes... Saun Sauni :) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"you didn't listen to the wind when I was on my knees..."---this is a nice discourse on the subject Saun...and one I understand too well..nice work. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Saun.... The words you've written here are very meaningful to me. It's also a very beautiful writing.....as everything you do..is..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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