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I'll Stay
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I'll Stay |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You and I have shared a lot of life's tomorrows.. Since the day our hearts were joined as one.. There has always been a rainbow we can borrow.. When all our dreams just seem to come undone.. I'll stay with you until the sun dries up the sea Until the stars and moon fall from the sky.. I'll stay with you, you're such a special part of me.... Without your love, my heart would surely die.... Never be afraid that I would leave you lonely.. I will stand beside you come what may.. I promised long ago--to love and hold you only.. So listen to these words my heart must say.... I'll stay with you until the earth has passed away.. Until the ground beneath us is no more.. You know that you have been the reason that I stay.. And no one else will ever love you more.... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very beautiful vows Sunny enjoyed your poem  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Rex.....I appreciate it!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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UFgirl05 Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 10Winter Haven, FL, USA |
That was beautiful, that was true love |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
right from the heart, Sunny1 ... beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed this one... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed this one... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sunny1...this is my favorite...what lovely lovely vows... never say never |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a beautiful expression of devotion, Sunny... it's precious K |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you to UF girl05, MA Miller, Sunshine, Paula and Severn........ I'm so glad you all liked this.....it's meant to be an anniversary poem to my husband of 20 years......if you all like it, then he will, too! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Geez, you have done it again. My, you must be very caring inside to write as you do. Hurry with the next one!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Bill.....there's a lot more where that came from, as experience leaves one with a huge inventory to write about.... Don't you think? (Really glad you liked this one!!) ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Aww sunny thats such a sweet poem.... you know it comes from the heart.. im sure your husband will love it! who wouldnt! that poem could melt any ones heart!! Keep it up!!  ~*~LiLOnE~*~ [This message has been edited by LiLOnE (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh! That was ssssoooooo beautiful, but then again, everything you write is... Sauni Sauni :) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A great poem of love and devotion--- Good to see it still exist in someone. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
LiLOnE...... Thank you so much.....I appreciate your words of support! Saunni..You always have such nice things to say, and I thank you also for your input....... Prometheus.....There's still a lot of love left in the human race..... I see it in your writing all the time! Thank you for reading this poem....... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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