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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-07-17 02:24 PM


to the mouse of my discontent ...

i say, "go eat cheese"
  why do you eat at me?
  like lecherous bloodsuckers
  the mosquitoes of my desire

i plead, "go gnaw barley"
  why do you gnaw at me?
  like carnivorous flesh-eaters
  the piranhas of my ambitions

i beg, "go nibble newspaper"
  why do you nibble at me?
  like fastidious storekeepers
  the watchman of my motives

i implore, "go burrow a nest"
  why do you burrow at me?
  like laborious miners
  the diggers of my longings

to the mouse of my discontent
  hear my request to leave me be
i'll deal you in if you consent
  if only you'll listen to me


M.A. Miller
07.17.00
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

                   M.A.M.






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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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1 posted 2000-07-18 10:46 PM


Such interesting metaphors, cleverly expressed.



Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2000-07-19 12:10 PM


meadowmuse ...

clever maybe, but eons away from your recent "Twilight" piece ... thanks for reading ...

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