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Love Shines Like a Precious Diamond
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Love Shines Like a Precious Diamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Shines Like a Precious Diamond A precious stone that will endure one thousand years and still be pure. A fine gold band holds on tight to that diamond with all its might. Diamond ring you shine so bright as I watch you bathing in the light. Your sparkling brilliance caught my eye like twinkling stars suspended in the evening sky. And this ring I hold in my hand will someday caress my sweethearts hand. Surely our love will endure one thousand years and still be pure. Brilliantly shining with beauty and might just like a precious diamond bathing in Love's bright light. Jameslee@July16,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I loved this piece.... A fine gold band holds on tight to that diamond with all its might This was a unique and lovely way of describing a diamond ring!! Nice!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Nice ..... You just had to know that women can't stay away from diamonds !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This was really beautiful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it..Great work!~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
simply beautiful SBJ... lots of hope, promise and anticipation in this jewel of a poem... well written later-romantic-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Now this better!!!!!! I like the brighter, happier ones from you. This one is most definitely a gem. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
full of romance, this one James enjoyed muchly.... regards, sudhir |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Jimmy is excellent and it's perhaps the most beautiful piece I've seen you done. I'm also glad to see you exploring into the world of stanzas and rhythmic motions. Great job and I'm looking forward to more! Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Elegantly beautiful work, I loved the idea and it flowed very well~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thank all of you for your precious replies...my heart is shining...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
James--I think she would like your poetry as much as the diamond...I know I like poetry better. Great poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Martie poetry is indeed very beautiful but it is hard to ignore the beauty of a woman and the beauty of a diamond...thank you for your nice comments...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a lovely poem beautifully expressed. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh James ... this is lovely! Such wonderful promises and inspiration wrapped up in the thoughts behind the beauty of this ring! Excellent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful James! so full of romantic anticipation and future dreams.......very well written! take care...ethome........ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I think this is beautiful!!! I loved the feel of this. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you brian, Kit, ethome, and Sea for your gracious remarks...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James, you have the ring...is there a date? And by poetry will you relate? My best wishes, God speed! And, oh yes, I could see your smile in every word... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunshine there is no date only an opportunity to wait that diamond is still shining bright I'm still lonely at night... I'm in a good mood right now...I can see the light on the horizon..James |
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