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Open Poetry #8

Authoritative Hands

DestinysCharm
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since 2000-04-28

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0 posted 2000-06-13 08:47 PM

Authoritative Hands

Authoritative hands
of duration
impressing smoothly,
sailing currents
of affection
into inundation.

Judgment is lost
in whirling reflection
pattern of play,
while exploration
takes on a realm
of it's very own.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-06-14 06:01 AM

Destiny~
An interesting perspective
of exploration. Nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-06-28 12:17 PM

Destiny, there is something in this that draws one in...two reads here...I know what I see...I wonder what others will see...?

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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3 posted 2000-06-28 10:12 PM

This is wonderful, DC. Very comforting!

Denise

Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28

Posts 61

4 posted 2000-06-29 09:48 PM

An excellent use of words, and feelings. I must agree with "Sunshine".... and excellent poem.

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