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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Commitment A tongue has struck an inner shell. A double ring cries out the bell. Within and without pressure plies, Echoes to eternity flies. Resonating forever more Nirvana touches every shore. The common swell that rings for thee Circles around and sounds for me. Rippling over the common weed And shaking loose the common seed. Sending it on a journeys bend Bringing it a forever end. And here I stand in fear of fail, Of holy vows and oaths assail. Baptized in a common core, Must with thee forevermore. Yet still was struck the final bell And now forever, rings the knell. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful Seymour! committment is just a word . Like the ringing of a bell it just sounds out there without invading the real desires of the heart. But the heart is treacherous and seeks freedom, sometimes freedom from committment. I may have this all wrong, however I tried.. Read you later........ethome.......... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Seymour, Sometimes, I wonder, if there is any one poem from you that does not capture my imagination.... and all the times I wonder, I come up with the same answer... None... Wonderful work again, my friend... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, What I was trying to say is, once the bell is struck, negitive or positive it is forever. Thank you for the read and comment. Sudhir, If I have done that, then I am happy. Your friend Sy |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Justbleu, Thank you for the nice comment. |
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