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coming's gone again ...
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
coming's gone again ... ask me this again this day the day came went and begged my stay to come or go and chance to miss of coming's gone again like this a curt response to quests like these my coming's already gone to please to please the day came asked me when i went to go but came again M.A. Miller 07.15.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A.M. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It just happens that way, before you know it your coming's gone and you can try to go but you'll come again.......Great work!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"and the time has come to circle back home" very cool poem MA... like the phrasing and play on words the repetion of thought to show the "again" of it all life is a constant of circles.. coming and going..but never far from ourselves... great reflective writing jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks much ethome and jm ... thought maybe it might be a little cryptic, but i guess not ... thanks again. |
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