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ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-07-16 12:10 PM


coming's gone again ...

ask me this
   again this day

the day came went
   and begged my stay

to come or go
   and chance to miss

of coming's gone
   again like this

a curt response
   to quests like these

my coming's already gone
   to please

to please the day
   came asked me when

i went to go
   but came again


M.A. Miller
07.15.00

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.M.



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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-16 01:07 PM


It just happens that way, before you know it your coming's gone and you can try to go but you'll come again.......Great work!!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-16 01:17 PM


"and the time has come to circle back home"

very cool poem MA...
like the phrasing and play on words
the repetion of thought to show
the "again" of it all
life is a constant of circles..
coming and going..but never far from ourselves...
great reflective writing
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

3 posted 2000-07-16 11:05 PM


thanks much ethome and jm ... thought maybe it might be a little cryptic, but i guess not ... thanks again.
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