Open Poetry #8 |
In Time |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Time.... Passes by they say that night follows every day You live for the time when night brings true love your way.... Love has a tender touch that You want to give so much Your heart may be talked into a love at first sight.. Somewhere, on some night.... Just be sure.. when you give your heart to somebody new.. that it's right.. and they give their heart to you.. Take some time.. flowers look their best when still on the vine.. Love will find your heart in Time.... Wait.. for that special one you'll meet.. soon your dreams will be complete You'll have everything that lovers all Share.. you will be there.. And love will find your heart in Time.... Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I really really like this one...Oh,I like the idea very much...~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Simply and beautifully perfection. ....... Words fail me this was sheer poetry.Wow |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good things come to those with the patience to wait, even in love. Very wise words Sunny |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
i thought I'd found the real thing...that it was MY time...guess not |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
i liked this.....very well expressed,,, Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth..... My hope in sharing this one was that someone would feel the message.... If you did, then I succeeded! Thank you! Marsha... I wrote this to myself a few years ago....to slow myself down.... Thank you for your kind words! ethome... Waiting is hard, but you are so right!! Thank you....... Paula.... My friend, I know your heart by your words, and I also know that a heart like yours will be blessed by a special love. It just takes time... JulieAnn.. I hope it put a smile on your face.....that's the greatest joy in sharing.... Thank you all!! Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunny1,you always impress me by your poetry Just think I'm your biggest fan of all.Love your poetry.Keep writing I'll keep reading it as always |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Time was Love was Time passed Love passed living ceased Love touched Love took Time stopped seeing ended flowers wilt dreams die before i love again so will i ------- started to post this on its own, but it really is a reply to this one sunny---- - i don't know why, but these thoughts ran through my mind as i read it.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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