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Fantasy (Repost)
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Fantasy (Repost) |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Fantasy I’ve taken a flight of my imagination Seeing visions of desire and hope Spanning through this daydream As I sleep in this state of unrest I can feel your exposed breast Creeping into my fingertips While I try to decipher fantasy from reality In this so called dream of passion Where your skin melts in mine Feeling you breathe in, as I breathe out Rhythmic clatter of heartbeats untamed This dizzying feeling drives me insane Sweat dripping down on my pounding chest Gasping for air no time for rest Moving in stride your presence untold Feeling the fire embraced in your hold I want so much more than this fantasy And cross this dream into reality. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done Spiked. Those fantasies can consume can't they? You have spread the picture out in fine style and words. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And what a day for a daydream....you seem to be recovering nicely...glad to see it... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Ethome Serenity couldn't help but repost this one. Thought it needed another round. Thanks |
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