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The language of color (part two)
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The language of color (part two) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The language of color (part two) Color stems from the primary shades And there are three, blue, red and yellow. Each have meaning in some sort of way And each shout out a different hello. Dark blue is the color of confusion. Red is the color of dangers lair. Yellow symbols the bright and delight. Add them to line and your half way there. The next step is mass and direction. How much of each is used and just where. Each one offers different inflection You sum these up to a simple declare. Of course there are shades and variations And they all speak out like a filigree But the basic is there for summation Your mind will up with a chosen degree. It was and is the first language began And to this day the first language of man. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I'm finding this class very interesting. I want to stay after school ! !  Yes, Maestro ... continue please. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, We'll have to make a class. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dark blue is the color of confusion. Red is the color of dangers lair. Yellow symbols the bright and delight. Add them to line and your half way there. The next step is mass and direction. How much of each is used and just where. Each one offers different inflection You sum these up to a simple declare. ------------------ no shades of gray... nothing is ever just black or white some one should tell you ... YOU ROCK when you write  Ya know what Sy-guy .. your just TOO COOL for school  later-rainbow-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you ARE [a] class [act]. Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Seymour, this si wonderful the lessons are just getting better and better. excellent poem. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Your pretty cool yourself. *L* Sunshine, Thank you. *L* Brian, Enjoy your comments. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Well as long as I sent the first one back I might as well keep them together. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymore.... I love the way you combined the 2 parts, line and color. If I'd had teachers back in school who could word things like you do, I would have done better!!!!!!!!! This is wonderful......... (glad I made it to class!!!) Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sunny enjoyed the apple. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AHA! I was right! You are reading the palms of Africans, Indians, Japanese and very cold eskimos! These are two excellent pieces of work, Sy. Not only are you a man OF class, you teach it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, I owe you another thanks. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Get back up there with your brother! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent Seymour! Great comparisons and teaching qualities combined with poetic expertise. Much enjoyed! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
my spirit is painted by your words this is lovely........ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Loved Part 2 Seymour! Lessons learned through lyrics last a lifetime!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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