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Painful Conclusion
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Painful Conclusion I never did enjoy those times when the sorrows of life look you squarely in the EYE. Revealing incredibly painful revelations for your sad eyes to behold and sinking your heart and soul to the cruel depths down below to sulk in your hurt and CRY. And while you wallow in all the painful confusion you begin to wonder if life is real or only an illusion and WHY. Til that last massive overdose of sorrow brings way too much hurt for today or tomorrow and you come to the Painful Conclusion the only hope your have left to live is to shrivel up and DIE. JamesLee@July15,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I like the paradox at the end. It is too close to true. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure we've all had moments like that. I liked this too, James. Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Well....you know I always love your writing, but this is so dark compared to ones of late. you have gone through tough times before, and you can do it again. I know it isn't what you had in mind.....but fate has cards that it doesn't want to show. Hugs, my friend Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Been there, done there  and when i am in that state, i will take a looong nap and the world seems a more friendly place when i awake like the sentiments here |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...this is so darkly painful and you just make me want to reach out and hug you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you jamie, Denise, Marina, kaile, and Paula for your warm responses. I am fine...just a stressful period in my life...I thought I had the strength to step back and wait and now I am not sure...but I can feel the strength coming to me...I can see where it is coming from...within myself. My plan is to face that which I fear the most..and it will not be as bad as I feared...I know...James |
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