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To Callie
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To Callie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hair of gold falls softly in curls And those blue eyes light up the world Playfulness of youth abounds everywhere Pink cheeks highlight skin so fair You are a very special little girl Birthdays are your time to shine It is when the stars will align Radiating up in the evening sky Twinkling and shining from so high Here is to your wish coming true Days will be filled with many things new Always know she is your best friend Your Mom will stand beside you to the end Callie I hope your day is grand And that you'll dance when you hear the band Live and love with all that you are Let your dreams take you far I know it will be a happy birthday Extra special wishes are sent your way  *This poem was written for Callie, who is my best friend's daughter. She will be three years old on Wednesday. I hope she has a great day.  < !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
what a way to say happy birthday great tribute my friend |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a beautiful tribute to a child! wonderful! Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Oh, my gosh ! One of my muses is named Callie ... and I like it so much that I suggested it for my friends who named their baby Callie Rose ... AND ... one of the children I mentor shares this lovely name ! This is simply an awesome and tender piece of poetry. I just love it ! Love it ! Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
A very sweet sentiment to a girl who is obviously very special to you! Great poem! (And Happy Birthday Callie!)  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Lone Wolf..... What a wonderful way to wish her a Happy Birthday!!!! Your thoughts are a special present that no one else can give, but you!! Beautiful........ Your words become music to my soul...... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wondeful! A great way to say Happy Birthday. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey . . . Thank you my friend. I thought so too. Irish Rose . . . Awe, thanks. I am speechless. Marge . . . Callie is a great name for a muse!! Very happy you loved it. It was a pleasure for me to write it.  You are too sweet my friend.Trew . . . She is very special and so is her Mom. Thank you!! Sunny . . . My thoughts exactly. I wanted to do something different. A great way to say Happy Birthday. Eagle One . . . Thank you my friend. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such a lovely poem! I'm sure she will treasure it forever. Wish her a happy birthday from me too.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Lone Wolf! I'm sure she will cherish this for the rest of her life! Denise |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
This is soooo sweet. I agree with everyone this is very nice. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A most exquisite and grand way to wish a happy birthday... Lone Wolf, your talent never ceases to amaze me... Wonderful writing! wow... regards, sudhir P.S. I am double checking if I got the name right this time...  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poet deVine . . . Thanks, I am sure she will. I'll be sure to pass your wishes along. Denise . . . Thank you so much. Lady Web . . . Thanks for reading. She is a sweet little girl. Sudhir . . . I am speechless my friend, for your talent never ceases to amaze me!! Thank you for the kind reply. LOL at the name . . . I was just teasing!!!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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