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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-15 12:30 PM




             You don't think I notice
        How you turn the other way
             You don't think I notice
        When you've got no words to say
             It's a real small town
             What you spread around
             is gonna crawl right
                  back on you!
             You don't think I notice,
                    But I do.....


             You don't think I notice
        All the dirt you throw my way
             You don't think I notice
        how you throw more every day
             You're a real small spoke
             in a real small wheel
             with a real small brain
                  that's true!
             You don't think I notice
                    But I do.....


             You don't think I notice
        That you'd love to see me leave
             You don't think I notice
        All the lies your friends believe
             You don't seem to notice
             that I'm happier than you
             This smile on my face
             stays right in place
             What's your mirror saying
                      to you?


             I'm real happy with myself
         Doin' what I love to do
             I'm not sittin' on some shelf
         Killin' time with the likes of you!
             But one of us is slidin' fast
             It ain't me
             so it must be you!
             You don't think I notice
                     But I do.....
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Your words become music to my soul......




[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-15-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-07-15 01:40 PM


I'll bet you are glad THAT's off your chest!

{~,^}

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-15 04:30 PM



  Yeah.......but it felt good to say just
             what I had to say!  

                 Ain't words great?

  P.S. This is dedicated to my neighbor.


Your words become music to my soul......



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
3 posted 2000-07-16 01:43 AM


SLAM...great job Sunny...small town minds small town mentality how well I know it
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