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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-15 10:07 AM




               I don't understand
                     ~You~
           tell me that you love me
           but when I tell you I need
                     ~You~
           simply turn your back and
           head on out the door......
           What's all this for?


               I don't understand
                     ~You~
           say you'll always hold me
           but when I reach out to touch
                     ~You~
           pull away like I just burned
           you with a match!
           What's the catch?


               I don't understand
                     ~You~
           say we're disconnected
           and you act like I reject
                     ~You~
           say it's only temporary
           time will tell......
           You go to hell!


               I don't understand
                     ~You~
           talk to everybody but
           when I sit here and talk to
                     ~You~
           say you don't want to hear
           my same old line......
           Well...that's just fine!
           You lose this time.....
           We both feel we're rejected...
           Temporarily Disconnected!!


Your words become music to my soul......



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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-15 10:10 AM


AWWWW girl dont we all feel like that in relationships sometimes...even just for a few moments sometimes when the little doubts creep in much less the big ones
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-07-15 10:11 AM


This happens a lot I see.....liked the way you did this!!!  Cool!!  Enjoyed this very much!!  
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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