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I want nothing more..........
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I want nothing more.......... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I want nothing more than to write..... I can sit at my table with pencil or pen.. And contemplate various moods that I'm in.. And let it all out as I take it all in.. I want nothing more than to write..... I want nothing more than to write..... I've lived through some good times, I've lived through some bad.. And some times when words were the best friends I had.. They make me feel happy.. They make me feel sad.. I want nothing more than to write..... I want nothing more than to write..... A secret affair I have had all these years.. With words that I've written and nobody hears.. But now life's become so abundantly clear.. I want nothing more than to write..... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
... and write you did beautifully Sunny1! I much enjoyed the rhythm and flow in this verse ... very well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you feel so strong, like this, that is when a place to call home, is Passions... well done, well said, welcome...[again] Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Kit.........thank you...... I always appreciate your input.... I'm glad you liked this! Sunny........thank you...... I do feel Passions is my home.... It's people like you that make me feel so welcome and warm here..... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want nothing more than to write..... A secret affair I have had all these years.. With words that I've written and nobody hears.. But now life's become so abundantly clear.. I want nothing more than to write..... --------------- your write my poets heart in this one... writing is oxygen for a poet.. this is great writing that last verse is perfect take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ And .... you've done it well. I want nothing more than to share a little piece of my heart ... And soooooooo - I write !  But ooooooooh - the joy I get when others do it too ! And share it with me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
And I want nothing more than to read what you've written! This is just wonderful. . . I feel that almost all of us are the same. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
You have voiced sentiments for most of us I think and you did it beautifully! Great flow. MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Janet Marie.... I'm inspired by the best, I learn from you..... Marge.... Your kind words are always a very welcome sight.... Sven.... I think we are all the same. I only hope that I can reach the same excellance in my work as you do in yours.... Magnolia Blue.... Your verses flow like a river of silk....I can only try...... Thank you all......so much! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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