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Canada Geese |
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Dom Mart Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 164Florida |
Canada geese a-flying-- What a thrilling sight they are. Canada geese in the parking lot-- Watch when you walk to your car. Canada geese in formation Nature's majestic fleet. Canada geese on the sidewalk-- Watch where you put your feet. Canada geese against the clouds. Thrill at their heavenly climb. Canada geese in the parking lot. Careful, don't slip on the slime. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well written, with a comical nature, the title caught my eye instantly since I am Canadian afterall. However, I'm not sure if your're praising Canadian geese or mocking them,( maybe you're doing a little of both) but, you could have named the geese "american geese," but instead choose to name them Canadian, so I'm not so sure if I am impressed with your mocking. Take care, Melissa Honeybee< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Dom Mart..... This was good, and funny, too! I'm in Alaska, and we get huge flocks of geese here. I especially liked the ending!!!!! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks for the smiles here...  HUGS |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dom~ This is indeed a comedic take at the masses of the Canada Geese in migration. But, oh what joy to see their flight. *Melissa~ Soothe your little ruffled feathers - Canada Geese are a beautiful sight and they come in great numbers on their migration paths from Canada. Often millions of them are in the migratory paths ...  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I really love this - next to swans, these are my favorite birds... and for those who haven't experienced life with these wonderful creatures - who will eat out of your hand once they trust you..... that slime is GREEN  |
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