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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Senselessly Blind Throw the nurtured grass toward tornadic wind our long lost ancestor's wallowed and sinned. Now sunlight's shadowy silhouette of me cries the tears created by being carefree. I saw the destructive winds of time appear dare my mind take heed and yield to fear. Way too senselessly blind to forge ahead now this empty mind looks on in dread. Left to settle losing debts of inner turmoil desiring to just be buried within soil. Your breath once life to this soul now it's bitter and black as coal. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Your breath once life to this soul now it's bitter and black as coal. LD this poem leaves me stunned sort of words, especially the last few lines. Very powerful and the pain marks every line. I hope everything is ok.  a wonderfully written poem."I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Gloria.... YOU are officially recognized as a POET!!!! Great work! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow i been away a bit you just get better and better love this one losty |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent writing LD... very cool, cryptic and emotional poem great rhyme take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Brian: Thank you very much for your wonderful compliment, and thanks for your concern, I am fine. Doreen: Wow, what an honor to have you tell me this, thank you so very much. Walt: My thanks to you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Janet: Thank you very much, I appreciate your reading. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your thoughts flow so seamlessly in this verse Lost Dreamer ... a wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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