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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Legend Blackest pitch of night Innocence will not prevail In darkest dungeons Love has failed Removed was the armour That exposed Satan’s soul Even pleads of desperation Won’t deliver from the devil’s hole Speak no more of freedom Dark ears only listen with a grin In flames of fearless fire To late to repent your sin A sacred soul up for sale The devil will always buy in the end Eternity in hideous Hell Forever to partake in his legend It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh girl this is delish in its darkness very cool poem have you been hanging with those vamps again???  excellent cryptic wording here and perfect rhyme and cadence... read so great aloud. scared of you girl LOL later-devil-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
As JM said, very cryptic poem.. Awesome, nonetheless... Speak no more of freedom Dark ears only listen with a grin In flames of fearless fire To late to repent your sin What an imposing thought... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Speak no more of freedom Dark ears only listen with a grin In flames of fearless fire To late to repent your sin A sacred soul up for sale The devil will always buy in the end Eternity in hideous Hell Forever to partake in his legend Forget the vamps-- sounds like you had lunch with the mistress of the dark. This was a hauntingly lovely read and I just loved the flow from beginning to end. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marina...... That was great.....I enjoy the aftertaste of verse that is slightly dark, but very spirited....... Nicely written, with substance..... My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, Deep and dark writing here. Great imagery. Felt like I was there. Nice writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you to everyone. I know this one is a little darker then most my work. Sometimes you just need a change!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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