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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
There was and there is always a communication gap Between what had been told by me and heard by you But things told by me were never meant the way you heard it Neither I overlooked your insecurities at anytime nor used your love for pleasure But ultimately we have reached a point were 'We' dont coexists anymore and its difficult with all That have been said and done by bith of us But just question yourself , how can I know you ? You never speak freely nor show your feelings In case we love how am I to know who you are I have tried so much but you always like to give hints You told to look my heart for answers and I'll find it I tried and I couldn't , for I don't know you If there is a possiblity of a long term relationship I need to know what you fear and you need to know me When I tried to put things more clearly we drifted apart Just know even I suffered the loss of your love You're a simple woman and I'm also a simple person But together we're a complicated bunch with so many hideouts We don't speak and even if we speak its misintrepreted I want you but not with so many masks to mar your real person I want you as you wish you'd like to be I want you as you desire me too I want you uninfluenced by me I want you like the person who once touched my life I want you as the person who knows when I'm confused I want you to be frank and open only to me Above all I want to know you We'll grow and growth does not mean wealth Growth of love in our hearts That can enlighten our inner being Lit our passion and make each other love Its candour we lack and its necessary I'm not perfect and neither are you So don't strife for perfection I'm perfect with you as you're with me Just remember what I told you earlier You're simple and I'm too But together we're a complicated bunch Its clear that we have lost trust in each other Neither I could help nor you could We both tried in subtle ways but its insufficient I need to see you and you need to see me Its our ego and insecurity that fails us You're my sun and I'm your rainbow Just feel that and even though whatever happens In the years to come nothing will be lost If we decide to part in love and friendship Just remember I'll always be with you When you need me the most We'll laugh our woes and uphold our pride But when its time we'll know and we'll cry together Sincerely A_L |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A_L--a painful speech written with wonderful sensitivity...I hope that everything works out for the best... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
This was wonderful, absolutely wonderful. i don't know exactly how to describe how it touched me, but it definately did!! great work!! |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
amazon_lover... I felt the pain and anguish in your poem of wanting to love someone who doens't let you in. I too have had that experience before. You express it so well in this poem. AWESOME!! Impassionata |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks....actually something made me stop by here...i dont see a future with my ex anymore...so I just let her go...its difficult to make someone love....its like trying to wake up someone who is acting as though in sleep... Sincerely A_L |
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