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Open Poetry #8

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Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:16 AM

We had fun through the
night,
but it came to an end.
There wasnt a fight
That we had to mend.

I laughed until I
cried,
And I looked next to
me,
You were by my
side,
The place for you to
be.

I couldnt have enjoyed
the night more,
but from the laughing,
My stomach was sore.

You rubbed it gently
with your hand,
I didnt have to ask
Or even demand.

You stayed with me
til we fell asleep,
I knew then
You were mine to keep.

Thanks for all the good
times we've shared,
Honestly,
You cant be compared.

I am hoping that you dont
break my heart,
but im glad,
That we finally made a
start.

~If anyone can think of a title for this poem I am open to suggestions...thanks~

notlikely2
Member

since 2000-06-16

Posts 308
UK

1 posted 2000-07-14 07:32 AM

Nice Poem Beth.
How about,
"The end of the Beginning"

Just an idea.

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