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Think Twice |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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Oh you can think twice, About me being nice. I heard what you had to say, thinking I wouldnt hear, There'd be no way. Oh you were so very wrong, To ever think we could belong. I couldnt date someone as mean as you, You were playing a game, You knew it too. I suppose you didnt think that I would feel pain, There was no agenda, nothing to gain. And now I dont want you anymore, I wouldnt even mind it, If I was lonely like before. It would be better than being shamed, Now look at it Your the one being blamed. tell me now how you feel, Doesnt it hurt, Hurt for real. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
hahah..beth..youre a winner chick...i know who you are bagging and he deserves it. you have a fan club out here that wont let you be lonely anymore..stay strong and fight for your place in love and life! (Blessed Be Ree) [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beth you and I must be going through the same things...! I relate to your poem! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Ah Pout, you are always a true friend...Thanks for your replies...But I still wanna see more of your poetry...come on 99...I know you have more (lol)~ ~A Romantic Heart....thanks for your reply...If we are going through the same things the only suggestion that i have is to stay strong....Thats my motto...thanks again~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahh come on...don't be bashful...give him heck. Nice to see someone let go and feel good about it. Keep the positive in your life. Nice read by the way. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth...... You are the winner................ Like we like to say up here in Alaska: "there's a lot more salmon in the sea!!!!!!" My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beth, Powerful words and emotions displayed here. Hang in there. What we give, we get back 10 fold be it good or bad. He will get his. Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Mark...I think he has suffered enough now..however just to get the message across I might just write a few more to let it out fully....lol....thanks~ ~Sunny1...As we say in Australia...there is more blowfish in the sea...lol...thanks for your terrific replies~ ~Lone Wolf....Oh what he gave out he will get back....And I will enjoy the good karma that comes my way....ta!~ |
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