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His Sunset
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His Sunset |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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His Sunset God, I come to you with a friend in mind I must give her heart a little peace this time I need to pray that she dreams my heart Tonight, she must feel me even worlds apart... I've just heard her words of an unfair game She needs my love so her world can change And, I've found a view she can hold at night So, as I pray, Dear God, take me to her tonight... I want to be there when she closes her eyes And, I want to hold her, God, across these skies Let me whisper the way to an awesome place She'll then find you, God, face to face... I will lead her upon the greenest hills i see Because the higher we are the closer she'll be As we are standing there, God, reach for her hand Now carry her to your precious land... She now must see what you so lovingly share Show her that sunset and how much you care Tell her how each color says something new And, that the rows ahead are made from you... Point out the palest blue mixed slightly with white Tell her it stands for the times you are there by her side And, before her tell her what the pink row shows Tell her it stands for peace so her heart can grow... Make sure she sees purple and all that it holds That this color is what keeps her from the bitter cold And, she must see the red in it's many shades Tell her red is the love that will keep her safe... I want the gold tones to stand far from them all Tell her this color here will never let her fall And, throw in some green where the sky then ends Let it be known this stands for a lifetime friend... God, you've shown her that a sunset is more than a view And, you've shown her now that it comes from you With your help I gave her your heart and your home And, I've just given back a dream of her own... Saun Sauni :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
God, you've shown her that a sunset is more than a view And, you've shown her now that it comes from you With your help I gave her your heart and your home And, I've just given back a dream of her own... You sure turned to the right place to ask for help... she is one lucky girl to have one such as you to want to share this with and with his help, how could you miss. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is amazing. . . So many colors in a sunset, and you've managed to find them all. . . and to give them to one that you care about. . . just wonderful. . . Superb. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is absolutely stunning and written with so much compassion, heart and soul... what a beautiful, sincere, serene poem superb writing Saunni...truly perfect take care, jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is very very lovely and touching. What a beautiful song of your soul. |
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michelax Junior Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 16Malta |
Emotionally distinct, warm, compassionate, great. - Michelax |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ What a lovingly beautiful piece of your heart. Joy beyond compare in sharing God with a friend ... Compassion beyond compare in sharing a friend with God. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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