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ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2000-07-13 10:33 PM

LOVE'S BEST KISS ...

To frowns of sadness bring joy's best smile;
With teeth gleaming so, to cast a shadow.
Look away from its brilliance at first glance;
Slow to grow accustom to its glossy glow.
Then bask in its gift of spirit's lifting;
A sun shower of smiles to glisten upon anytime.

To eyes of forlorn bring comfort's best huddle;
With arms stretching so, to be Earth's quilt.
Shy away from its warmth at first touch;
To burn in its fires of settled strife.
Then wrap up in its gift of calming embers;
An oven of huddles to rest upon anytime.

To hearts of forgotten bring love's best kiss;
With blood beating so, to burst dam's hold.
Fend away from its rapture at first embrace;
To be swept up in love's hypnotic trance.
Then bathe in its gift of healing powers;
An ocean of kisses to savor upon anytime.

M.A. Miller
07.13.00
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.M.

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-14-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-14 01:15 PM

Shy away from its warmth at first touch;
To burn in its fires of settled strife.
Then wrap up in its gift of calming embers;
An oven of huddles to rest upon anytime.

To hearts of forgotten bring love's best kiss;
With blood beating so, to burst dam's hold.
Fend away from its rapture at first embrace;
To be swept up in love's hypnotic trance.
Then bathe in its gift of healing powers;
An ocean of kisses to savor upon anytime.
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very nice ...beautiful imagery and emotions
lovely sensual poem
well written, read with a nice rhythm
to it...
like your choice of poetic vocabulary as well
most enjoyable read
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

2 posted 2000-07-14 03:33 PM

thanks much, jm ... this site is so inspiring ...

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

3 posted 2000-07-14 05:43 PM

well done. Only wish I could learn to right w/ such beutiful vocabulary.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

4 posted 2000-07-14 10:46 PM

IsGona,

You've said the definitive word ... "Learn" ... (IMHO) Vocabulary is more than using big words ... It's using the right combination of words to convey a fluid thought ... More than the use of a dictionary or thesaurus ... It's the understanding of the many meanings a single word can give ... Thanks so much for your comments ...

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-14-2000).]

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-07-14 11:08 PM

MA...lovely imagery here...I like your stuff

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-14-2000).]

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