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I Miss His Hands(repost as me muse is dead!)
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I Miss His Hands(repost as me muse is dead!) |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
I miss his hands That held mine when he first said hello I miss his eyes That looked so much like mine I miss his arms That held me in that first embrace I miss his lips That kissed mine and trailed across my face. I miss his body That fit so well against mine I miss his breath That quickened on my neck I miss his voice That was so gentle in my ear I miss his music That was so sweet and clear. I miss the odor of candles That burned in the room I miss the dance of my Tongue entwined with his I miss the movement Of my hands on him I miss our being together In a room romantically dim. I miss our special Time in that little town I miss sitting across The table from his smile I miss our talks Our touches and our caring I miss the smell and The taste of him...our sharing. I miss him. Ooh,how I miss him. ©1999~CJB~ ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ [This message has been edited by MagnoliaBlue (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful read. As for the missing muse, ask Janet Marie for some hints on where and how to find it. She seems to have had alot of practice with that lately.lol Glad I stopped to read this. It was well worth it. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Magnolia, this poem is no miss.....it's a hit! Very nice writing  |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Mark and Balladeer...thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
awww I'm sorry! I read that and felt your pain there. Sauni |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lol at Mark...my moody muse is becoming famous(infamous) LOL I was just telling balladeer on his repost... there must be some pull of the moon calling our muses off. I've noticed several poets of late with missing muses...I guess its part of it... something we have to deal with. At least we have these great reposts.. I remember this one...I liked the way you missed his scent... mmmmm very sensual great writing take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I remember when you wrote this,I am so happy you two are still together in love! Huge hugs to you both.  Gossamerwings ;) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MagnoliaBlue, You certainly do, as you have expressed in this poem of yours. Very nice, and very sensous. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I found this to be so longing and heart rending. I think it's wonderful work and glad you posted it again. Good poetry never loses it's beauty in the appreciative readers eye. |
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