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Jamie
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0 posted 2000-07-13 12:36 PM


Just Three Words

Can we talk?
      If you wish.
Will you listen?
      If you speak.
So you say.
      So I hear.
Let's hear then.
     Let's hear what?
You know what.
     Don't think so.
You won't say?
    I can't say.
And why not?
    I don't know.
Get a clue.
    I have one.
Well say them.
    How can I?
With you lips.
    I still can't.
Just say it.
    Do you mean?
Those three words.
    Three little words?
Not so little.
    Don't be insecure.
But I hunger.
    Don't we all?
Then say it.
    I will not.
Then I will.
    Well go ahead.
LET"S GO EAT!!!  


that's the end

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


© Copyright 2000 Jamie Patterson - All Rights Reserved
Martini
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1 posted 2000-07-13 12:41 PM


great piece
I must say I didn't expect that ending
I really enjoyed it

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-07-13 12:44 PM


Jamie......

          Just three words:

          YES....YES....YES!
             I Love it!


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-07-13 01:21 PM


too, too cute...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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4 posted 2000-07-13 01:24 PM


cute stuff, you witty thing you...LOL
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-07-13 05:26 PM


Just three words ....  This is clever!!
hey Jamie I love it great stuff  

Honeybee
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6 posted 2000-07-13 06:42 PM



LMAO, very clever and cute my friend, nice twist at the end!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

Martie
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7 posted 2000-07-13 06:44 PM


Hey, you had me going there...now, say it will ya...too cute!
Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-07-13 06:48 PM


Loved the twist
Jamie
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9 posted 2000-07-15 12:07 PM


Glad you all enjoyed it. Thought I would post something light hearted for a change.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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10 posted 2000-07-15 12:43 PM


BIG SMILE HERE
Poet deVine
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11 posted 2000-07-15 01:17 AM


Cute little poem!
Jamie
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12 posted 2000-10-27 07:22 PM


dang nabbit--work graphic...

[This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 10-27-2000).]

Severn
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13 posted 2001-02-19 04:34 PM


heh - but never alone right?

HEH


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

Jamie
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14 posted 2001-05-19 11:10 PM


well-- seldom alone anyway....hehehe

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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