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Just Three Words |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Just Three Words Can we talk? If you wish. Will you listen? If you speak. So you say. So I hear. Let's hear then. Let's hear what? You know what. Don't think so. You won't say? I can't say. And why not? I don't know. Get a clue. I have one. Well say them. How can I? With you lips. I still can't. Just say it. Do you mean? Those three words. Three little words? Not so little. Don't be insecure. But I hunger. Don't we all? Then say it. I will not. Then I will. Well go ahead. LET"S GO EAT!!! that's the end Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
great piece I must say I didn't expect that ending I really enjoyed it |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie...... Just three words: YES....YES....YES! I Love it! My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
too, too cute... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
cute stuff, you witty thing you...LOL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Just three words .... This is clever!! hey Jamie I love it great stuff  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
LMAO, very clever and cute my friend, nice twist at the end! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey, you had me going there...now, say it will ya...too cute! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Loved the twist |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Glad you all enjoyed it. Thought I would post something light hearted for a change. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
BIG SMILE HERE |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute little poem! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
 dang nabbit--work graphic...[This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
heh - but never alone right? HEH ...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
well-- seldom alone anyway....hehehe There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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