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The In-between lies Somewhere in the Middle...
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The In-between lies Somewhere in the Middle... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Where does the ending start.... and the beginning end? If there's no black or white.... then where does gray fit in? We need the in-between.... to make everything fit, you see.... To reach the finish from the start the middle has to be............ How can you be a lover.... if you've never been a friend? How can you hope to discover.... all the secrets kept within? If you skip right to the climax.... you'll miss the in-between.... the best is in the learning.... that's the middle part, you see.... The beginning's come and go.... and if we're lucky there is no end.... In between the black and white.... the rainbow shades fit in.... Don't overlook the middle.... It's secrets time will tell.... And if you like this riddle.... Then I've done my job quite well!! (from a middle child....) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is smack-dab-in-the-middle perfect! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Sunshine........ As always, I sincerely appreciate your input, as I really am a great fan of your work..... (poetry must run in our family, twin!) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny1, How can you be a lover.... if you've never been a friend? How can you hope to discover.... all the secrets kept within? If you skip right to the climax.... you'll miss the in-between.... the best is in the learning.... that's the middle part, you see.... Sunny1, what insight you have, as to being a friend before being a lover. And learning about the secrets kept within, and not missing the in-between along the way. This is so touching and so true. Thank you for the privelage of reading what you write. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill....... You don't know how much I enjoy reading what YOU write!!!!!!!!! Thank you........ As Always, Sunny1 My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sunny One - what a terrific poem! I love poems that carry a message of wisdom. You've laid out this poem so well. Great work! |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I absolutely loved this poem great great work my friend [This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
LngJhnAg....(what does the Ag stand for?) Thank you.....I appreciate the input, (especially from a pirate!! Ha!!) Martini..... Your words mean a lot, as you write such beautiful things! (My muse is in an amusing frame of mind today...........) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
In between lies the mystery Of secrets that await to be unveiled Time is of no importance When true friendship does prevail As true friends develop a bond Their spirits and hearts soon belong To each other where in between Mysteries of friendship and love are revealed  Sunny, you have a nice poem here Inspirational and Heartfelt Need I say I like it alot [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi CocoBaci...... Thank you so much for your words......I see you know the true meaning of the 'in-between'! I hope we become friends..... My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sunny1...if I could just get past the begining never say never |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is delightful! Excellent verse.... thank you for a wonderful read full of truth and wisdom. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Excellent! Beautifully written! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Great poem from beginning to end....there is alot to be said about what lies in between... you have done well here my friend.....  Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula, Doreen, Magnolia, and JulieAnn, I thank you all so much and am truly glad you enjoyed this one! A friend once said: 'Life is what happens in between!' Thanks again..... Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
BRAVO..... Very well done, Middle is good. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The middle is ALWAYS the best part Sunny1. . .just think what a Twinkie would be like without the creme filling!! Wonderful poem, my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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