Open Poetry #8 |
Crackerjack Heroes |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So hurray for the dandelion warriors The ones who remember to dream Those who see with the eyes of a child And dare to follow each crazy scheme. So hurray for the cracker jack heroes Those who remember the prize Isnt money or cars or gemstones But the light in a lovers eyes. Hurray for the dreamers and lovers They're the ones who make it worth living With their fantasies poems and passions And hearts that live for the giving. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
So easy to read ... Flows just right ... Perfect title to boot ... Nice piece ... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and hooray for this clever and delightful poem! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MA Miller....thanks I kinda like crackerjacks Balladeer...I'm glad you enjoyed this...it was a fun write. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Hooray! to you dear poet for writing and sharing this gem. Wonderful! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ooh, quite lovely!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula...... I've said it before, but gotta say it again............. I like your style!!!!!!!!! (I like Crackerjacks, too!!!!) Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful way to say how much the poets here mean to you...or did I miss something here. That's what I got out of it and I love the style and flow. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...as always its nice to know you like my stuff. Jeffrey...coming from you thats high praise indeed thank you. Sunny1...good stuff crackerjacks... Mark...one particular poet especially, but yes to all my friends. |
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