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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
By: Peter Cahill I am the sound that you can see, I wonder about the music that I free. I hear what cannot be heard. I see what cannot be see. I want everybody to know who I am, I am the one who will set your mind free. I pretend to listen when I'm really not, I feel your voice, in which you have sought. I touch your hears, with a sound like no other, I worry for what in my sound you will discover. I cry not to the fear that has been put on by thee, I am the one you will set your mind free. I understand you concern, I say that trust is not one won and only earned. I dream that you will understand my plea, I try to be all that I can be. I hope that my songs can make you me, For I am the one wou will leave your mind to see... The Eliptical Circle Website: http://midipete.webjump.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice job here, Peter... You've got a very nice introspective piece here - Lots of our poets have used this format here at Passions - I expect they'll like yours a lot..  |
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Sylvester Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 16 |
I like this. You really thought about what makes you tick. Good poem.  |
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