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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2000-07-12 03:04 PM

Last night I had to fight through tears
To see you smile at me.
Last night I had to fight through fears
that we would never be.
Last night I gave you everything
I always wanted to.
Last night you gave me everything
and all you gave was you.

Last night I said I loved you,
you needed not reply.
Because I already knew
by the look in your eye.
Last night your lips kissed mine,
they will never be the same.
For they cannot speak a line
if not to speak your name.

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-12 03:08 PM

Kevin
what a wonderful poem
I hope the person who you wrote this for reads it
may you find great happiness with this love!!!

keep up the great writing

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-07-12 04:22 PM

Kevin.....
          This was so warm.......
        I hope your love appreciates you!

             Thanks for sharing....

Life is but a dream...
so sleep easy...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-07-15 07:29 AM

Looks like lots of good progress is being made in a relationship...I hope for the best...excellent writing...James

Ann
Member

since 2000-07-07

Posts 64
Australia

4 posted 2000-07-15 07:54 AM

This poem was really sweet! I hope the one you wrote it for loves the poem...keep on writing!!

Ann

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-07-15 03:44 PM

Kevin~
This is so tender and softly melodic.
I think you shared a smile from your heart.
Beautiful thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

6 posted 2000-07-15 05:44 PM

Kevin, I really love how you write. I hope I didn't miss a book submision from you.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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