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The kiss
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The kiss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Kiss I lie below a white sky. Under the light of noon. Rorsahak clouds nestle and fly. And I am near to swoon. She lies my side rose bud lips And I am near to swoon. Touching her with finger tips Under the light of noon. My heart pains torment and bliss Under the light of noon Bending down to steal a kiss And I am near to swoon. Do I dare these lips in haste Under the light of noon. Do I dare these lips to taste And I am near to swoon. Will she allow this tete-a-tete, Or has the moment past in wait? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ahh- the hesitation; remember it is like the calm before the storm. Hope you got that kiss. Great read.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The lingering moment before the kiss, the excitement of it all.... by the way did you get it? regards to you seymour, sudhir. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
There's nothing as sweet as a kiss....... Did she kiss you first?? (loved this piece!!!!) Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ahhh I just love a man who plays with his rhyme  very very cool Sy-guy swoon to the moon ... and for crying out loud KISS THE GIRL!! LOL superb writing Sy later-lip-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Yes Sudhir, Yes Sunny1, Yes Janet, OK gator aid. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Glad you got your kiss, because it resulted in this lovely poem LIz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Yes I did and thank you. Love Sy |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Swooning just reading your lovely sentiments Sy ... beautiful and tantalizing read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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