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To my love |
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ShOrTy New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 6falMOUTH.MA |
Here I am so far Away I never thought I'd be here today but never the less I'm here all alone I still can't believe it my mind has been blown How on this great earth could I part with you A question you must be asking yourself too I know I'll get by, one day at a time I'll ease this away with my cool gentle rhyme Just knowing one day our eyes will soon meet Just gives me that feeling I know I can't beat My friends, family, and now my love too I'm tested to see if I'm willing to come through I know all the dangers that will lie ahead I simply focus on winning instead To some it may be quite harder to miss But I know the finish result in your kiss I cannot pass up all the joys that me be We have been destined to end happily Benjamin Charles Way  [This message has been edited by ShOrTy (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions. This was a great read and I will look forward to reading more from you. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
This was a great read nice work I'm looking forward to reading more form you  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
WOW, what an entrance WELCOME, And long may you stay, It sounds as if life's making you pay, Oh never mind then, You'll always know when, Until that time comes, Come join in the fun, And right some more poems for me . Nicly written . i really enjoyed reading the poem as it had a lot of depth and meaning . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your poetry sings... Like a Melody... May I formally welcome you to this Passionate Place - I, too, hope you hang around - Your work is really good.. Check your email for a special greeting, OK??  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
this so very sweet and so sad!! I loved it!!!! so many words that speak to me!!! thank you fo rsharing an dwelcome to passions!!! I look forward to reading more form you!!!  Julie :) |
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