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Another Night
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Another Night |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I can feel her lonliness Even though miles apart Where once she slept on both sides She now has her part. Dreams come to her mind As graceful as a winter flake Landing softly on her soul So she may finnally rest. Her dreams, like mine Are of us sharing an embrace Holding onto one another Through this seperation we've made. And yes time does have meaning As it makes us grow some more But our hearts are not caring For we feel each others warmth. So one day rest my lady We will be as one And the miles that have seperated Will be our victory song. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very pretty, Michael G.!! I hope you do sing the song of victory! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can feel her lonliness Even though miles apart Where once she slept on both sides She now has her part. Dreams come to her mind As graceful as a winter flake Landing softly on her soul so she may finnally rest. ------------- And yes time does have meaning As it makes us grow some more But our hearts are not caring For we feel each others warmth. So one day rest my lady We will be as one And the miles that have seperated Will be our victory song. ------------- beautiful writing Michael serene and sincere with longing very nice read this morn take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Sweet and sad, not sad...filled with longing. Longing is a powerful aphrodisiac. Take care until you are able to be with the one you love. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I loved it... absolutely beautiful!! I hope your love knows how much you care... May the distance disappear for you soon. [This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cool poem, I enjoyed it lots, sometimes even if the distance between you and the one you love isn't great, it can seem miles and equally at other times, although the distance is far you can feel the love surround you, I hope whatever the distance at least your happy, as life becomes unbearable if your not, stay optimistic . And the distance will seem to shrink, wounderfully deep, meaningful poem that flowed really well . A pleasure . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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